Could you check my grammar mistakes?
19.November, 2009
Hi. Could you check my grammar mistakes in my writing. Thank you!
"It offers business to business as well as business to new and existing customer.
Perrys offers a wide range of great deals on new cars, used cars and vans On the left side of the web-page there is an advanced search engine which helps to find the best option from a range of cars. On the right hand side, there is dealership contact box and in the middle between these two sections there is a ‘Hot Deals’ box. Under each search box there is a “Motability” banner which promotes car schemes for disabled people.
The website is comprehensive and easy to use. All items are located in the right place and it is easy to navigate even if you have never used it before.
The search engine is designed to search for the best deals. You can search for new cars, used cars or vans. Most of the new cars offered by Perrys are even cheaper than cars from main dealers.
The main purpose of the ‘Hot Deals’ section is to inform potential customers about fantastic savings and show to them they can buy the same car and save money.
The dealership box contains Perry’s dealers sorted by town, so you can easily get in touch with your local dealer and, for example, arrange a test drive.
Perry’s Motability is a not-for-profit organisation. It is designed to give disabled people access to safe, reliable and affordable cars.
The main aims of Perrys are:
• provide good quality of services to its customers.
• meet customer’s demands and their expectation.
• inform as many people about perry’s deals as they can to sell more and maximize profit.
• attract new staff by advertising their current job vacancies and job conditions on the website."
"It offers business to business as well as business to new and existing customers.
Perry’s offers a wide range of great deals on new cars, used cars and vans on the left side of the web-page there is an advanced search engine which helps to find the best option from a range of cars. On the right hand side, there is dealership contact box and in the middle between these two sections there is a ‘Hot Deals’ box. Under each search box there is a “Motability” banner which promotes car schemes for disabled people.
The website is comprehensive and easy to use. All items are located in the right place and it is easy to navigate even if you have never used it before.
The search engine is designed to search for the best deals. You can search for new cars, used cars or vans. Most of the new cars offered by Perry’s are even cheaper than cars from main dealers.
The main purpose of the ‘Hot Deals’ section is to inform potential customers about fantastic savings and show to them they can buy the same car and save money.
The dealership box contains Perry’s dealers sorted by town, so you can easily get in touch with your local dealer and, for example, arrange a test drive.
Perry’s Motability is a not-for-profit organisation; it is designed to give disabled people access to safe, reliable and affordable cars.
The main aims of Perry’s are:
• provide good quality of services to its customers.
• meet customer demands and their expectations.
• inform as many people about Perry’s offers as they can, to sell more and maximize profit.
• attract new staff by advertising their current job vacancies and job conditions on the website."
19.November, 2009 um 6:07 pm
IT SHOULD BE
Could you check my GRAMMATICAL mistakes?
ITS THE ONLY MISTAKE!
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19.November, 2009 um 6:52 pm
"It offers business to business as well as business to a new and existing customer.
Perrys offers a wide range of great deals on new and used cars and vans. On the left side of the web-page there is an advanced search engine which helps to find the best option from a range of cars. On the right hand side, there is a dealership contact box and in the middle between these two sections, there is a ‘Hot Deals’ box. Under each search box is a “Motability” banner which promotes car schemes for disabled people.
The website is comprehensive and easy to use. All items are located in the right place and is easy to navigate even if you have never used it before.
The search engine is designed to search for the best deals. You can search for new cars, used cars or vans. Most of the new cars offered by Perrys are even cheaper than cars from main dealers.
The main purpose of the ‘Hot Deals’ section is to inform potential customers about fantastic savings and show to them they can buy the same car and save money.
The dealership box contains Perry’s dealers sorted by town, so you can easily get in touch with your local dealer and, for example, arrange a test drive.
Perry’s Motability is a not-for-profit organization. It is designed to give incapacitated people access to safe, reliable and affordable cars.
The main aims of Perrys are to:
• provide good quality service to its customers.
• meet customers’ demands and expectations.
• inform as many people about perry’s deals as they can to sell more and to maximize profit.
• attract new staff by advertising their current job vacancies and job conditions on the website."
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19.November, 2009 um 7:38 pm
"It offers business to business as well as business to new and existing customers.
Perry’s offers a wide range of great deals on new cars, used cars and vans on the left side of the web-page there is an advanced search engine which helps to find the best option from a range of cars. On the right hand side, there is dealership contact box and in the middle between these two sections there is a ‘Hot Deals’ box. Under each search box there is a “Motability” banner which promotes car schemes for disabled people.
The website is comprehensive and easy to use. All items are located in the right place and it is easy to navigate even if you have never used it before.
The search engine is designed to search for the best deals. You can search for new cars, used cars or vans. Most of the new cars offered by Perry’s are even cheaper than cars from main dealers.
The main purpose of the ‘Hot Deals’ section is to inform potential customers about fantastic savings and show to them they can buy the same car and save money.
The dealership box contains Perry’s dealers sorted by town, so you can easily get in touch with your local dealer and, for example, arrange a test drive.
Perry’s Motability is a not-for-profit organisation; it is designed to give disabled people access to safe, reliable and affordable cars.
The main aims of Perry’s are:
• provide good quality of services to its customers.
• meet customer demands and their expectations.
• inform as many people about Perry’s offers as they can, to sell more and maximize profit.
• attract new staff by advertising their current job vacancies and job conditions on the website."
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